I wondered where the chaps who did N gauge bogies for Lima went, now we know ;-). It actually looks far more Lima than your comments - the body also appear to be on stilts over the bogies and the wheels look too small - there should be measurably more showing below the bottom of the axle boxes (and they appear not to turn in the axleboxes but somewhere higher up - which must be part of the mess)
Looking at the underframe I am wondering about the regulator box somewhat. Almost all of the photos I have show no regulator box present, and some periods have gas cylinders in the centre section.
The top of the battery box is also wrong - it hangs from the body rather than being blobbed onto it as the model is. It's hard to tell from that view but is the top of the battery box proper right, it seems to be narrower and blank not just over the area that should be see through but further on.
Roof is also still missing the destination board clips, that seems an easy fix and they were present into BR days.
Has the generator gone walkies or has it been hidden by the Lima bogie ?
What else.. rivets on the solebar - you've got a funny looking token little group of 6 each end, but the real solebar looks like it was attacked by a nutter with a rivet gun and has a lot more than the random sample someone picked to pretend its got detail. Also note the rivets if added are not quite symmetrical. The main sets of them are but the V hangar and steps are vary the pattern a bit.
Footboards are also wrong for the earlier liveries.
Overall its looking not too bad other than the bogie, wheels and jacked up effect. The gas cylinders for older periods are not a big deal to add if someone cares but the stones box bothers me - and would be hard to fix by the look of it. The battery boxes could really do with the nasty blobbiness improving if possible - Bachmann do this by making them a fitting and the recent models capture battery box hanging beautifully - eg the 4CEP.
Alan