Much better, though the bogies are still to tall, stretched in the vertical axis. Compare to the real bogie side here on Paul Bartlett's site. If compressed back up the axleboxes will probably end up at about the right height against the actual wheel centres. The axleboxes are a bit narrow as well and the bolster has coil springs instead of volutes, though both those are minor points compared to getting the basic shape right.
The bogies on the K41 are probably closer to the ends than the K42. Moving bogie centres inwards was, along with the revised profile, one of the ways the GWR altered their coach design to fit a smaller, less route restricted loading gauge for the '1938' series.