Looks good, that.
I always test my stock on a layout with handbuilt track - generally, if it will run on there, it'll run on anything. Exhibition layouts need a lot more tolerance from stock than ones which are built and never moved. It's worth taking time to fettle and make it work (within reason - no point in fighting a ploughed field) as you'll end up with something which will run first time anywhere you choose to take it.